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本周大作文预测新鲜出炉🔥可参考日期:12月27日-1月2日

作文预测
2024-12-26

1. 题目及其大意

Young people who commit serious crimes, such as a robbery or a violent attack should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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2. 思路提纲

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3. 高分范文示例

Nowadays, whether juvenile delinquents should receive the same punishments as mature offenders remains a subject of heavy debate in society. While I acknowledge the potential benefits of deterrence in this proposal, I strongly believe that authorities should impose different penalties on young offenders.

 

On the one hand, it is crucial to recognize that young wrongdoers are still in a critical stage of psychological and emotional development. Given this, we can expect that they may misbehave and imitate unlawful behavior they see on social media or watch on TV, such as robbery and violence. Thus, giving them the same punishments as adults fails to consider these significant developmental factors and may be deemed unfair.

 

Moreover, I believe that the main goal of any reliable judicial system is to rehabilitate rather than merely to punish. Instead of debating the types of punishments for underage offenders, governments should focus on educational and counseling programs to reform teenage criminals. By doing so, countries can help reduce recidivism rates among young individuals and ensure that they become productive and respectful citizens.

 

Nevertheless, I acknowledge the importance of similar punishments in the context of crime prevention. It cannot be denied that some teenagers use their age as an excuse to avoid strict punishment. Therefore, in cases where the crimes are particularly heinous, they should receive similar penalties as adult criminals. This approach would ensure that they take the law seriously and fear significant consequences if they break it.

 

In conclusion, I strongly believe that imposing similar punishments is not a reasonable or effective measure. A justice system that considers the age and circumstances of minor offenders is necessary to effectively address juvenile delinquency.

 

Word count: 277

4. 高分词汇或表达

 

(1) Juvenile delinquents: 青少年罪犯

(2) Mature offenders: 成熟的罪犯

(3) Deterrence:威慑

(4) Impose different penalties: 施加不同的惩罚

(5) It is crucial to recognize that young wrongdoers: 至关重要的是认识到青少年犯罪者:

(6) Imitate unlawful behavior: 模仿违法行为

(7) And may be deemed unfair:并且可能被认为是不公平的

(8) Reliable judicial system: 可靠的司法系统

(9) Bating the types of punishments for underage offenders: 为未成年罪犯调整惩罚类型

(10) Teenage criminals: 青少年犯罪者

(11) Recidivism rates: 再犯率

(12) In the context of crime prevention: 在犯罪预防的背景下

(13) Avoid strict punishment: 避免严格的惩罚

(14) Heinous: 恶性的

(15) Fear significant consequences: 恐惧严重的后果

(16) Imposing similar punishments: 施加类似的惩罚

(17) To effectively address juvenile delinquency:  以有效解决青少年犯罪

(18) A critical stage of psychological and emotional development: 心理和情感发展的关键阶段

(19) Misbehave: 行为不当

(20) To rehabilitate:  改造

(21) Counseling programs: 咨询项目

(22) It cannot be denied that: 不可否认的是:

(23) Use their age as an excuse:  以年龄作为借口

1、题目及其大意

Some people say that the government should regard health care as the first priority, but some others believe that there are more important priorities to spend the tax payers' money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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2. 思路提纲

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3、高分范文示例

Currently, there is an ongoing discussion about whether the authorities should prioritize citizens’ health or utilize the taxes they collect for other essential sectors. I opine that both sides have merits.

 

On the one hand, some people advocate prioritizing health care because access to quality health services is a basic human right. If people regularly pay their taxes and their leaders ignore their health needs, it constitutes a significant neglect of government responsibility. Moreover, a country lacking adequate health care provisions, such as free check-ups and vaccines, is unlikely to function well. Specifically, insufficient hospitals, medical professionals, medicines, and treatments can lead to increased cases of epidemics and deaths. In contrast, a healthier populace can boost the economy, as they are more productive and less frequently ill.

 

On the other hand, it cannot be denied that countries also face pressing issues beyond health care, such as inadequate education. If the government fails to invest in this sector, the economy and the country's level of innovation may suffer. By using taxpayers' money to purchase updated educational tools, renovate schools, build new ones, and increase teachers’ salaries, economic growth and innovation are likely to follow. Furthermore, infrastructure development is also crucial. Daily, we rely on public transportation, railways, and roads. If these are adequate and effectively maintained, countries can obtain economic development and gain numerous conveniences since it reduces risk of accidents and improves travel time.

 

In conclusion, while it is undeniable that health care should be given significant priority due to its role in ensuring a basic human right and supporting a country’s effective functioning, I concur that federal leaders should also invest in other areas such as infrastructure and education.

 

Word count: 280

4、高分词汇或表达

(1) There is an ongoing discussion : 存在持续的讨论

(2) Utilize the taxes they collect : 如何利用他们征收的税款

(3) I opine that both sides have merits : 我认为这两种观点都有其优点

(4) Some people advocate prioritizing health care : 一些人主张将医疗保健置于优先位置

(5) It constitutes a significant neglect of government responsibility : 这构成了对政府责任的重大忽视

(6) Increased cases of epidemics and deaths : 疫情和死亡病例增加

(7) Healthier populace leads to less frequent illness : 更健康的民众导致生病频率降低

(8) Pressing issues such as education and infrastructure also need attention : 其他紧迫问题如教育和基础设施也需要关注

(9) Investment in these areas can lead to economic development and innovation : 在这些领域的投资可以促进经济发展和创新

(10) While it is undeniable that health care is crucial for a countrys effective functioning : 虽然不可否认医疗保健对于国家有效运作至关重要

(11) I concur that a balanced approach is necessary : 我同意需要采取平衡的方法

1、题目及其大意

The leaders or directors of organizations are often older people. But some people say that young people can also be a leader. Do you agree or disagree?

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2、思路提纲

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3、高分范文示例

Nowadays, it is quite common to see that those who supervise or manage a firm are often older individuals, but some insist that young ones can also take the lead. I partly agree with this notion for the following reasons.

 

On the one hand, I believe that older people are more qualified to lead or direct an organization because of their knowledge and experience. They have worked for a long time and thus have more valuable insights when it comes to handling company issues or other problems. This abundance of wisdom and experience cannot be matched by the youth. For example, someone with decades of experience in investing and managing companies may be known for his strategic insights and ability to navigate economic challenges. His extensive experience, which younger individuals do not possess, enables him to make well-informed decisions, showcasing the unique value older leaders bring.

 

On the other hand, I won’t deny that young people can also be leaders, particularly due to their adaptability. Technology is constantly progressing, and it cannot be denied that many older individuals lack familiarity with this area. In contrast, young people are generally more open to change and innovation. They are less inclined to adhere to conventional practices and beliefs, unlike older generations. A good example is Mark Zuckerberg, the founder of Facebook. His remarkable adaptability to technology has enabled him to lead multiple companies in today’s digital age.

 

In conclusion, while older individuals bring invaluable knowledge and experience to organizations, the youth’s adaptability and familiarity with technology also make them strong candidates for leadership roles in today’s society.

 

Word count: 265

 

4、高分词汇或表达

(1) supervise or manage a firm: 监督或管理公司

(2) some insist: 一些人坚持认为

(3) can also take the lead: 也可以担当领导角色

(4) I partly agree with this notion for the following reasons: 我部分同意这一观点,原因如下

(5) valuable insights: 有价值的见解

(6) abundance of wisdom and experience cannot be matched: 丰富的智慧和经验是无可匹敌的

(7) strategic insights: 战略见解

(8) navigate economic challenges: 应对经济挑战

(9) extensive experience: 丰富的经验

(10) well-informed decisions: 明智的决策

(11) showcasing: 展现

(12) constantly progressing: 不断进步

(13) lack familiarity: 缺乏熟悉

(14) less inclined to adhere to: 不太倾向于坚持

(15) invaluable knowledge and experience: 宝贵的知识和经验

(16) strong candidates for leadership roles: 领导角色的强有力候选人

(17) are more qualified: 更有资格

(18) with decades of experience: 拥有数十年的经验

(19) due to their adaptability: 由于他们的适应能力

(20) more open to change and innovation: 更加开放于变化和创新

(21) todays digital age: 当今的数字时代