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本周大作文写作预测新鲜出炉🔥 可参考日期:11月22-28日

作文预测
2024-11-21

1、题目及其大意

It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn about the other culture from people. We can learn as much as from books, films and internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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2、思路提纲

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3、高分范文示例

Due to the rapid advancement of technology, fewer and fewer people are embarking on a journey and instead are relying on traveling books, movies, and websites. Because of this, some consider going places as futile. I partly agree with this notion based on the following reasons.

 

On the one hand, I admit that traveling virtually is cost-saving unlike doing it in person, rendering travels to learn cultures unnecessary. For example, innumerable books on traveling are heavily available, let alone films highlighting the best cultural and tourist spots in the world like Machu Picchu in Peru or the Eiffel Tower in Paris. All of these can be read in books and seen in movies. Additionally, the Internet is a haven of an unlimited travel blogs and videos for free, so thrifty travelers will find physical traveling unneeded when wanting to learn about various cultural backgrounds locally and abroad.

 

On the other hand, I must say too that the first-hand experience brought by physical traveling broadens one’s horizon. Taking the Great Wall of China as an example, it can easily be seen in books, but the details are often vague. Contrarily, up close, a traveler will see the intricacy of each wall, not to mention its length and its resemblance to a dragon; hence, it offers a real-life education and cultural learning. The feeling of being there in person strengthens our sense of happiness. Engaging in one’s culture, like trying out new cuisine and learning a new language, is totally fun and a form of stress relief rather than simply watching them films, so actual traveling remains vital for one’s wellbeing.

 

In conclusion, the convenience of virtual traveling is non-negligible, but for the sake of irreplaceable experience, I concur that traveling in person remains a necessity.

 

 

Word count: 294

4、高分词汇或表达

(1) rapid advancement of technology术的快速发

(2) embarking on a journey 踏上旅程

(3) futile

(4) I partly agree with this notion 我部分同意这个想

(5) rendering travels to learn cultures 渲染旅行以学习文

(6) innumerable books 无数

(7) thrifty travelers 节俭的旅行

(8) let alone更不用

(9) broadens one’s horizon 宽视

(10) vague模糊 

(11) intricacy

(12) non-negligible不可忽略

(13) cultural backgrounds文化背景

(14) I must say too that 我也必须说

(15) sense of happiness幸福感

(16) form of stress relief压形

(17) The feeling of being there临其境的感觉

(18) first-hand experience 第一手经验

(19) real-life education现实生活中的教育

(20) brought by带来

(21) wellbeing健康

(22) irreplaceable experience不可替代的体

(23) I concur that我同意这一


1、题目及其大意

In many counties, a higher proportion of criminal acts are committed by teenagers. What are the causes of this phenomenon? And What measures could be taken for reducing the crime rate?

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2、思路提纲

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3、高分范文示例

Nowadays, countless nations are facing a higher rate of juvenile delinquency. Various reasons contribute to this phenomenon, but several measures can be adopted to address it.

 

To commence the discussion, one of the major factors causing the higher proportion of teenage criminals is poor parental guidance. In today’s rapidly developing society, both parents often work full-time, leading to neglect of their children. This lack of supervision means they fail to observe their children’s behavior and reprimand them when necessary. Another reason is peer influence. As parents are heavily occupied by their jobs and children spend more time with peers in school and outdoors, they may imitate delinquent behaviors such as stealing, bullying, and more.

 

Thankfully, there are measures society can adopt to reduce the number of crimes involving teenagers, one of which is education from home. No matter how busy parents are, it is their responsibility to raise their children and teach them good morals. If they fail to prioritize their child due to their schedule, a vicious cycle of juvenile crime may continue. Teachers should also play a role in mitigating teenage crime. They should strive to identify students who may be at risk of engaging in unlawful acts or who are victims of peer pressure. If teachers are also involved in preventing teenage misdemeanors, underlying issues can be addressed more effectively.

 

In conclusion, I believe that the high rate of juvenile offenses can largely be attributed to poor parental guidance and peer influence. Considering these primary factors behind youth crime, teachers and parents should make concerted efforts to reduce the number of young offenders.

Word count:  266


4、高分词汇或表达

(1) Countless nations are facing a higher rate of juvenile delinquency (无数国家正面临更高的青少年犯罪率)

(2) Several measures can be adopted (可以采取几项措施)

(3) To commence the discussion (开始讨论)

(4) Higher proportion of teenage criminals (青少年犯罪者的比例较高)

(5) Poor parental guidance (父母指导不力)

(6) Rapidly developing society (快速发展的社会)

(7) Leading to neglect of their children (导致忽视孩子)

(8) Peer influence (同伴影响)

(9) Delinquent behaviors (犯罪行为)

(10) A vicious cycle of juvenile crime (青少年犯罪的恶性循环)

(11) Mitigating teenage crime (减轻青少年犯罪)

(12) Engaging in unlawful acts (从事非法行为)

(13) Preventing teenage misdemeanors (防止青少年轻罪)

(14) High rate of juvenile offenses (高发的青少年犯罪率)

(15) Can largely be attributed to poor parental guidance and peer influence (主要归因于父母指导不力和同伴影响)

(16) Make concerted efforts (共同努力)

(17) Young offenders (年轻犯罪者)

(18) Adopt (采取)

(19) Good morals (良好的道德)

(20) Fail to prioritize their child due to their schedule (由于日程安排未能优先考虑孩子)

1、题目及其大意

 

The government money should be invested in teaching science rather than other subjects so as to help a country make progress and develop. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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2、思路提纲

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3、高分范文示例

Currently, there is a heated debate about how public funding should be allocated to promote national progress, specifically whether it should be directed towards science education or the learning of other courses. I agree that both deserve equal investment, as outlined in the following points.

 

On the one hand, I am sure that investing in teaching science can bring numerous benefits to a country, particularly in terms of technological advancements. Studies show that countries like Japan and Germany, which have invested heavily in science education, have achieved significant technological breakthroughs that are essential for improving healthcare, transportation, infrastructures, and other sectors. These advancements contribute to a progressive economy and lead to a higher standard of living for everyone.

 

On the other hand, I am also convinced that focusing solely on science education could lead to social issues. While science is undeniably important, other subjects such as arts, history, and literature should also be included in the school curriculum. A lack of exposure to these subjects can diminish people's creative and critical thinking skills. For example, the arts have been proven to encourage creativity, while the history subject teaches valuable lessons in morality. If schools exclude such areas from the curriculum, we risk building a society rich in scientific knowledge but lacking in creativity and ethical understanding.

 

In conclusion, while I concur that investing in scientific disciplines is crucial for economic growth, this should not come at the expense of other fields of study. I am definite that a balanced approach is necessary to foster a well-rounded society.

 

Word count: 257

 

4、高分词汇或表达

(1) Heated debate: 激烈的辩论

(2) How public funding should be allocated to promote national progress: 如何分配公共资金以促进国家进步

(3) Whether it should be directed towards science education or the learning of other courses: 是否应将其投入科学教育或其他课程学习

(4) Both deserve equal investment: 两者都值得同等投资

(5) As outlined in the following points: 如以下几点所述

(6) Invested heavily: 大量投资

(7) Significant technological breakthroughs: 重要的技术突破

(8) Contribute to a progressive economy: 促进进步的经济

(9) Focusing solely: 仅专注于

(10) A lack of exposure: 缺乏接触

(11) Diminish people's creative and critical thinking skills: 削弱人们的创造性和批判性思维技能

(12) Valuable lessons in morality: 有价值的道德课程

(13) Schools exclude such areas from the curriculum: 学校将这些领域排除在课程之外

 

(14) We risk building a society rich in scientific knowledge but lacking in creativity and ethical understanding: 我们有可能建立一个富有科学知识却缺乏创造力和道德理解的社会

(15) I concur that: 我同意

(16) Scientific disciplines: 科学学科

(17) This should not come at the expense of: 这不应以...为代价

(18) To foster a well-rounded society: 培养全面发展的社会